so far i have my intro, body, and conclusion. i know my conclusion is awful and way to short,i was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a read over and offer any feedback or tips? A Peer review of sorts i guess. also im only at 1000 words and i need to get between 1500-1700 words so if you notice anywhere that could use more details that would help a lot! And does the title and reference page count towards word count?? i appreciate any help! let me know if you are willing to take a look at it and how or were i can send it to you. Thanks in advance! Wish i found this site sooner!!!
