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so far i have my intro, body, and conclusion. i know my conclusion is awful and way to short,i was wondering if anyone would be willing to give it a read over and offer any feedback or tips? A Peer review of sorts i guess. also im only at 1000 words and i need to get between 1500-1700 words so if you notice anywhere that could use more details that would help a lot! And does the title and reference page count towards word count?? i appreciate any help! let me know if you are willing to take a look at it and how or were i can send it to you. Thanks in advance! Wish i found this site sooner!!!

Maybe it is better if you also included your expository essay so that we can give a feedback about it. Expository essays are simply essays that explain something with facts, as opposed to opinion. They are trying to expose something which is not actually revealed by some sorts.